Jan 9, 2009 7:58 PM
wedding day for a frind
win you stared loving each other you was like to candelas it the night now it is beriberi thin the sun in the sky your love was deep as a pedal of water now it is deeper thin the occasion deep lat your love bloom like a feed of rose's in the spring the one day lat you're kids pic for you're rose's of love for all your life's
Posted by
1CLOUDSTRIFE
| Jan 9, 2009 7:58 PM |
8 comments
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AmuletFortune | Sep 6, 2009 12:26 PM
ohhhhhhhhhh dat nice
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alienada | Apr 22, 2009 3:31 PM
thats deep
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hanabusa | Jan 21, 2009 4:05 PM
nice big brother nice
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nekogirl95 | Jan 14, 2009 7:09 AM
i like it bro
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Oneirophrenia | Jan 13, 2009 10:58 AM
ohwa...nice poem!!>___________< |
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_meow_ | Jan 12, 2009 10:49 PM
that's a really nice poem :)
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nMoura | Jan 12, 2009 1:23 PM
^_^very nice |
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Kaziph | Jan 10, 2009 2:18 PM
i's a real good poem^^ |