Revenge Game

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I will first start by saying the idea this story is trying to make is a little better than the general death game idea. A group of students are forced to kill each other or die one by one by the hands of the person they bullied. The problem comes from how it is made in the story. The motivation of the bullied kid doesn't have enough weight and is quickly explained within half of a page. None of the students seem redeemable or have enough growth to feel like they deserved this. The story feels rushed and if you are looking for good death ... game stories, you best look elsewhere.