I wanted to give this 8 but ending wasn't good enough. That dosen't feel like one, there was lost,at least, one better sentence.

"Fine" is not ok. some of the story was beter that than reast.

It's shame that IT's only One Shot, that could be very nice material from longer one (it's is like prologue to story not a story it sefl >.< and it's anoying becouse it's good,interesting prologue)

Little less than 8 but for sure more than rest things on my list with 7.

I would like to gave that 6 but most of time storys are to short and leaves unspoken plots (some alway can be but not like that and not so many)

And again this same with this same autor, it could be good story if it would be more than prologue.

Yes 8.! It's a porno with soul !

I could be 5 but not! Ending suck, is one big rumpus and in the end, IT is a and. Only ine information is that he will makes sex with her again, nothing more, no why he isn't using her like one-time girl like orthers, what she will do(for sure not leave it be like that)?