Feb 12, 2025
I finished this out of PURE spite.
There is not a single good thing about the entire story, do not waste your life reading this. To start off the main relationship made me actually gag. The reason was because they met when one of them was a kid! And the other guy saved him, years later they meet when the kid is an adult and goes to be a servant at the mansion. So, through the whole story this white hair guy calls him "master" which I mean if you into that when your fucking that's one thing. But this is completely different, this is
...
the worst power dynamic ever, especially since the master is a FUCKING STUPID HEARTLESS BITCH. Not only that the royal dude does not know what no means and actually hurts the white hair guy in bed and puts chains on him. It's just so icky.
The second relationship is a bit better, meaning it's actually Consensual. However, they have the same problem throughout the whole story without any resolution. And every time it is brought up they act like we haven't seen them have this problem before.
Then the last thing main thing that pissed me off the most was the world building. This is because it is a super interesting concept..... but they never developed it beyond the premise. Like for example the royals, they seem to be the top of the ecosystem but... How are they rich??? The only thing they seem to do is kill their own kind who have been corrupted and then make supplements for their own kind. But this has to be such a limited market, you can only get so many customers. But that's not the only issue with the structure of this world. There is this elixir that can corrupt a nobles core and the way to cure them is to....feel guilty about trying to kill them... that's it....it's a normal elixir no magic was used.... it just feels wrong. It makes no sense to me.
Overall just nothing about this was good...even the art felt lackluster. If you want something worth your time read 'It's Just a Dream... Right?!'
Reviewer’s Rating: 1
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